10 for 18 to 28

We dream of that,
We wanna be there
But don run too fast
dat u miss smthing here

We wanna have name & fame,
Money !! we want so more
But remember dude u r a kid,
dere's still tym to grow

We wanna achieve it all,
We wanna be on top
But jus take care
u don loose smthing here

We wanna win this race,
We wanna solve all maze
But try dat if in one u win
in other u don loose everything

Abhilasha..

Comments

shail said…
Good creativity!....but somewhere it's lacking something.......Can be even better.... at the last para ..last two lines...need to be worked on it...
yeah,rightly said.Nice poem and good views about life.I like this poem.keep it up.