Vacuum

Someone stab a sword in my chest
its better than the hollow.
Someone put any gas in the room
I'm dieing of the vacuum.
Someone bring a devil in my life
its better than being so lonely.
Someone put some poision in my glass
I'm long thirsty for water.
Someone put death in my life
Its long that I was alive.


I'm ready to die with sword
as a war martyr.
I'm ready to die in gas chamber
being a holocaust victim.
I'm ready to go with devil
to live in hell.
I'm ready to drink poison
with all my peace.
All I'm not ready is , To live without you,
To live in old memories with vacuum in me.

Comments

Unknown said…
Those are some real powerful words...

What tragedy befalled you that such painful words you utter?

Did you just broke out of a long distant relationship? :P
its a classic..
but its really,really a sad poem...
u must have written it from a heart in pain..
anyways welldone
Anonymous said…
maybe the hollow, the vacuum, the loneliness is all that there is ... the sword would be just a happy hallucination.
But we all love our hallucinations and we all need them.

Read almost all your poems, liked this one the best ...